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NaruSasu - Acknowledge Me

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Acknowledge me...

Look at me.

Do something to show me you know I'm here. I'm with you, I want to talk to you.

Just… "Acknowledge me."

No reaction. Not even a blink of those coal black eyes as you keep your blank expression and dark irises trained on the page of that god forsaken book in front of you. All you do is read.

I talk. You read. I get frustrated. You don't care.

I wish you would. I wish you'd see me, desperate for some sort of attention but I get none.

I should have walked away by now. You'd like that wouldn't you? But my heart keeps me here, because the stupid thing's in love with you. You'd think something like that might grab you're attention. Like this, "I love you."

… Still nothing. Those eyes just keeps skimming, those long, sleek, pale fingers turn the paper pages, and you continue to stare at the ink words. Obviously my spoken ones aren't as important.

Is there something wrong with me? Am I too toned? Too tanned? Too blond?!

What is it?

Why don't you look at me?

So many questions and I know you won't answer them because I'm not important enough to react to. I'm just me. Just Naruto. But you're not just Sasuke to me. You're so much more than that. You're the reason I'm here, the reason I want to be anywhere.

But I've had enough. Enough of you ignoring me, thinking I'm worthless.

That I'm not good enough.

So I listen as the room goes silent apart from my chair clattering to the floor. I watch as you don't pay attention but you will. I grin as your eyes lift to me in confusion when I take your face between my hands and make you look at me and only me. And I finally melt as our lips touch and you kiss me back.

"So that's how I get you to acknowledge me," my smirk is amused and happy and you're still in shock but you're looking at me.

"Idiot," the sound is sweet, because I'm here looking at you and I'll make sure you keep looking at me too.
Inspired by Michael (: because he always asks me to acknowledge what he's saying and I always ignore him. :P

I almost forgot about this one actually, I thought it up on Monday night, the version in my head was pretty good but I don't remember what it was so I made this up in 10 minutes.

Short things are fun I like it lol.

And at first I had intended to write this as an AkuRoku but god damn it they rule my life and NaruSasu just don't get enough attention from me anymore! :iconnotimpressedplz:

Besides I think this suits them. (:

Somewhat intelligent Naruto :/ :iconwtfisthisplz: I think I might make this one 'A' for the Alphabet series. But I'll think about that later.

For now, please enjoy.

Disclaimer: Hmm... chances I could set a trap and capture Neji... Slim *sigh* I'm going to ask Lee for help. Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto, I own the story.
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Is there anymore??!!??!!